Proposing poem.

Posted: July 31, 2010 in Uncategorized

“If you are a drop,
I’ll be the rain.

If you are d blossoms,
I’ll b a flower.

If you are the heartbeat,
I’ll b d heart.

I’ll take care of you,
without less of anything.

I love you my love…. forever and ever..”

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Comments
  1. nanno1982 says:

    this is a very sweet loving poem.. reminded me of good old memories 🙂

  2. Artswebshow says:

    nice poem.
    Warm and gentle

  3. This poem is sweet. Especially with the reference to rain, it makes me think that this is the spring of the relationship with love just blossoming 🙂

  4. Gaurav Sharma says:

    Sweet poem !! 🙂

  5. Very sweet! What’s the thought behind using “b” and “d” instead of the real words? Is it playfulness?

  6. Olivia says:

    Do I still have some time to say- YES>>YES>>YES..?? 😀
    Very sweetly expressed and nicely written. Simply expressed speaking of thousand words
    Happy Monday..

  7. Olivia says:

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  8. suresh says:

    nice poem…i like it…

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